Planned adjustments to double page spread

The first thing I will edit is the consistent text use. I will resolve this be incorporating a variety of text styles on to the page and select pages a new text for the body of my article as some of the feedback dictated it began to get unreadable as the text developed. I will then enforce subsections and bordered off sections of text to make the appearance of the text more appealing to the eye. I will highlight sections of the text to show a planned emphasis on particular sections. I am going to keep my header as I think the layered effect it proceeds to have on the page interests the reader to follow the page downward, where the article actually begins. Although I want to keep my trademark colours of yellow and red on the page I will bring in more colour and image. I have also re-evaluated the strategic placement of my photos and will adjust this in my final designs.